Preparing for a baseball game

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One thought on “Preparing for a baseball game

  1. I like the opening, although the song strikes me more appropriate for an ending than the beginning.

    The nat sound transitions seem too long and disruptive to me. It’s difficult to follow one statement to the next… they need to flow together.

    The ending works, but it’s sort of abrupt. Overall, this needs to be smoother, but I think it’s on the right track in general.

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